A book coach can meet you anywhere in your project. At the start, when you’re pinning down ideas. In the middle, when you lose the plot. At the end, when you need wise eyes on your entire manuscript, before you start to pitch.

1-hour Focus Session

Maybe you’ve been getting rejections, but aren’t clear on where your query’s off. Maybe you need to hash out a marketing plan. Or maybe you need to rework a tricky scene that’s not popping.

The 1-hour Focus Session gives us a block of serious cognitive engagement with your words and what you want them to do. Take my brain and point it at any problem you’re struggling with, and we’ll untangle the knots so you can keep moving forward.

The 1-hour Focus Session is also a great way to market-test ideas or brainstorm possibilities before you put pen to paper.

Whenever you need targeted guidance

$150/hour

1:1 coaching (monthly)

Together, you and I create a container of excellence to inspire your finest writing, and to continually improve your technique. Whether you’re writing a novel, a memoir or a nonfiction how-to, I read sections of your pages as you produce them, providing rich feedback that will improve your book. I guide you with specific written notes and suggestions, keep you on track with your goal deadline, and level you up with targeted improvement in the craft of writing.

This is an iterative process that sees your writing improving with each successive pass.

One month at a time with 2 deadlines & 2 coaching calls per month. With focus, you’ll be finished in 6 months. And if you faff about, well…

starting at $1850/month

Structural development

Not sure where to start, or how to organize all those ideas? I’m not the least bit surprised. A book is a big project. In this process, we will move you from overwhelmed to organized.

In the planning stage, we go broad in order to narrow down. We get granular on your reasons for writing this book, the reader you’re writing it for, and the best way to tell it. In fiction, l help you figure out your characters, their motivations and fears, the stakes they’re facing and the struggles they overcome. In nonfiction, we build a concept flow that takes your reader on an unforgettable journey of transformation and possibility.

We use these initial weeks to build a robust framework that will guide your narrative. You’ll know exactly what you’re supposed to write every time you sit down.

Time to completion: 4 weeks

starting at $2500

Nonfiction book proposal

This is what sells your book to an agent or editor. After the query, the proposal is the make-or-break item.

Here, we develop your table of contents against a robust outline, thoroughly annotating it so it’s informative and enticing. If you’re just coming to me at this point, we’ll do the deep-tissue work necessary to bring your TOC up to speed so an editor can see your book’s transformation promise at a glance. You’ll research a dynamic, diverse set of comp titles and pinpoint your audience, then I’ll help you develop a marketing plan that’s practical—and effective.

We’ll also put your two sample chapters through the wringer to get them perfect, because they’re a big part of the sell.

Note: the structural development package typically precedes the proposal.

Time to completion: 8 weeks

starting at $4200

White-glove Walk-beside

This is where your writing really takes a forward leap. In White-glove Walk-beside, I fully immerse myself in your pages, bringing deep focus to all aspects of your work. We create a container of excellence to get your finest writing on the page, continually improving your technique as we work through your draft.

Whether you’re writing a novel or a business how-to, I read every single page, providing targeted feedback that will measurably improve your book and your writing. I guide you with specific written feedback, keep you on track with your goal deadline, and improve your writing with iterative coaching on your craft. We check in weekly for the big-picture view and to work through tricky issues in your pages.

6 months of high-touch focus with 4 deadlines & a coaching call each week. If you’re disciplined, you can finish in 6 months.

starting at $25,000 or about $4k/month

Manuscript assessment

You’ve finished a first draft, but you know it needs a professional read before you take the next step in the publishing journey.

In a manuscript assessment, I evaluate your book for tension and pacing, assess the strength of your scenes and beats, and determine whether your characters are believable and rounded. And if you’re writing nonfiction, I’m evaluating your book for structure and narrative drive, clarity of concepts, and its ability to deliver immediate value to the reader.

In this thorough feedback process, I mark comments throughout your manuscript and provide you with a detailed editorial letter with concrete strategies to improve the writing.

Turnaround: 4 weeks

$3500

Two-chapter evaluation

Your draft is partly written, but you’d like a second set of eyes and confirmation that you’re headed in the right direction.

A two-chapter eval gives you a low-cost way to check in on your process. Is your voice on the page? Does your narrative unfold in an organized and engaging way? Is your character’s arc of growth strong enough, or, if you’re writing nonfiction, does the reader feel satisfied by the transformation journey?

In this process, I review your chapters, mark them up with feedback and provide you with an editorial letter reporting strengths and advising on improvements.

Turnaround: 5 days

$450

Ghostwriting

You know what you want to say, but you don’t have the time—or the will—to write it all down. I get that. Writing a book is a much bigger job than most people realize, and the time it demands is often just not in the cards.

For ghosting, I completely immerse myself in your material so I can learn it before I write it. We build a roadmap first, then we drive the route…together. For this level of intellectual and emotional immersion, you don’t hand me your idea and bugger off to Croatia for a year. Rather, we stay close throughout the whole process. And it’s really personal, deep work. Lots of conversations, lots of Q&As and your eyes on the material often, to see how I’m handling it and whether it’s evolving in the way we designed.

The length of this package varies depending on your needs.

$90k and up

 FAQs

  • A book coach nurtures a book project at three levels: the project management level, the editorial level and the emotional level. It’s different than an editor, who involves themselves only at the editorial level. These three different levels are integral to a book becoming a real thing in the world.

    Book coaches have come into being in response to a changing industry. Traditional publishing houses historically have taken care of all the steps to publishing a book, and it was the editor who would walk with the writer all the way through the months and years it took to produce a book. Some editors stayed with their authors throughout their entire careers.

    But that was then and this is now. Most publishers don’t have the capacity or resources to give their writers that kind of high-touch treatment. Instead, they now look for turnkey manuscripts—books that already are polished, carve a great narrative arc, and don’t need a lot of additional work. Agents know this too, so they’re increasingly inclined to only accept really strong manuscripts.

    It's up to writers to get their manuscripts into top shape. The field of book coaching has grown over the past decade to address this new part of the publishing process. A book coach gives your manuscript the care and attention that it needs to be a strong contender for traditional publishing.

    A book coach also fills that gap for people who are self-publishing or hybrid publishing. As the market becomes saturated with indie books, high-quality books stand head and shoulders above the rest.

  • Writing courses are great, and they teach essential concepts, but they’re not customized to your book project. Editors are also great to show you what’s not working, but a book coach gives you a personal tutor who will walk through your pages with you and show you how to improve your writing.

    Here’s what my mentor, Jennie Nash, says about why a book coach is so helpful. This is from the Your Creative Push podcast, episode 279, at 20:12:

    “A book is a massively big project. Most people don’t really understand this truth. A book is read in a linear fashion, so most people think that’s the way it gets written. But that’s not true. A book can’t be made in the way it is consumed—there are a lot of if/then propositions, a lot of logic…a lot of game theory, really. Strategy, like chess.

    “Writing a book is as complex in many ways as building a house. If you look at a Gantt chart that maps the stages of a big project—building a piece of software, say, or a house—you’ll see that a book project takes the same shape and structure.

    “A book coach brings a strategic mindset to tackling that project. A coach knows how to strategically approach the creative process. People tend to talk about “creativity” in hushed tones: those billowing ethereal silver mists of sombre mystery, where authors go to wrestle big ideas down from the clouds and into their typewiters. A book coach knows exactly where everything is inside those clouds. They can break down the complex creative work of ideating, drafting, revising and pitching (or marketing) a book through a replicable process. A blueprint, if you will, or a framework that leads to a tight, defined end product: a book.

    “Creators get lost in ideation, and it doesn’t take much to get stuck in the weeds once the words start to flow. A book coach helps to break the disorderly creative process into orderly parts, paving the way to a linear end product.”

  • Book coaching rates are all over the map, just like life coaches and executive coaches. My rates skew toward the higher end of the scale because of my skill, and the depth of professional experience I bring.

  • Fiction: contemporary fiction, literary fiction, women’s fiction, some historical fiction, young adult (YA), middle grade (MG), elementary.

    Nonfiction: leadership, mentorship, some business, nature, personal development, self-help, wellbeing, biography, psychology.

    I coach memoir, too.

  • I can assess whether your idea would sell in the marketplace.

    I have frameworks to help you organize your ideas.

    We’ll improve your writing skills through deep practice.

    I’ll show you how to design a narrative arc that’s satisfying, and if you’re writing fiction, it’ll also be believable (trickier than you’d think).

    I will teach you how to develop emotionally resonant characters that come alive and grab the reader’s heart. (This is key in acquisitions these days.)

    I coach you to establish writing routines that work within the constraints of your life.

    I’ll help you keep the momentum once you begin drafting.

    I’ll share the formula for nailing your pitch to agents, if that’s the way you want to go.

    I’ll leverage my knowledge of the publishing industry to position you for your best chance of success.

    Like any good coach, I’ll be in your corner cheering you on, holding your hand, drying your tears, helping you plan out your strategy…and making sure you write the best book you can write.

  • An editor will mark your pages up, make changes, and show you where your writing needs to improve. With an editor, you can see what you did wrong, but you might not know how to fix it. You may emerge a better writer.

    With a book coach, you’re learning all the way along the journey. It’s very personalized teaching, with lots of back and forth, lots of practice, and lots of feedback. You will emerge a better writer, which pays dividends in your next book project.

  • A book is a very big endeavour. Typically, it takes between six months and a year for a writer to complete a draft, sometimes longer. Revision comes after.

    If you’re wanting to publish traditionally, you’ll begin querying when you’ve got a good sample to show. The pitching process can take a long time—or a few weeks. No one can predict the market. The time from getting your book signed to seeing on bookstore shelves can be as long as two years.

    If you’re intent on self-publishing or hybrid publishing, you can move faster. If you’re organized and disciplined you get your book out there within a year.

  • Yes. When a book isn’t working—you’re not landing an agent, publishers are turning it down—there’s always a reason. A book coach can quickly discern where things need to improve, whether that’s in your query, your synopsis, your sample chapters or your proposal.

    All editorial problems can be fixed, if you’re willing to roll up your sleeves.

  • Sure. Think of it in terms of building a house.

    Writing a book is just like building a house: there are many steps and requirements, most of which you, as the eventual resident, don’t have a clue about. I mean, you’ve BEEN in great houses before. But I imagine you don’t know how to BUILD one.

    The quality of that house depends very much on who you hire to build it. You’ll spend more to hire a seasoned stonemason but the reward is a house that stands for centuries.

  • This is one of the biggest benefits of working with a book coach: you’re not in it alone! You will have a planning partner, and a partner who helps you set and meet your goals. Everything is doable when you’ve got someone else working along right beside you.

  • No. Nothing in this world—no editor, no agent, no co-author, no book coach—can guarantee a publisher will say yes to your work. What sells is a fickle mixture of zeitgeist, a publisher’s motivations, an agent’s connections, recent trends and even world events. Working with a book coach does not guarantee your book will sell to a publisher.

    We can, however, guarantee that you’ll learn the craft of writing more deeply, you’ll learn about yourself, and you’ll write the best book that you can. Hybrid and self-publishing have come a long way, and it’s totally possible to get your idea out there and build your name without a traditional deal.

  • Buying an hour of coaching is a low-stakes way to make ground on a problem you’re facing while also getting a feel for my approach.

    If you already know you need a certain package, we’ll start with a discovery call to check for fit: Do you want to work with me? Do I want to work with you? If the fit feels good, I send you an intake form and ask for some sample writing—another fit check.

    From there, I’ll have enough material to determine what will help you the most, and we’ll talk about the most efficient approach.

  • Of course you can write a book yourself. You can also replace your timing chain yourself. And paint an oil portrait by yourself. And swap out your kitchen countertops yourself. And replace your perimeter drains yourself.

    The point is, while it’s possible to do these things, it doesn’t always come easily or naturally. Expecting to write a good book without guidance is kind of like expecting to play in a symphony orchestra with the band training you got in high school.

    A lot of people don’t really know how to write a book—a truly good book. (Why would you? I don’t know how to design a freeway bridge.) And quite often, this fact doesn’t land until they’ve had multiple books rejected by agents over a number of years or self-published a book that sold 37 copies.

    The truth is, we pretty much all can write a book of some quality or other. Just like most of us can play soccer to some degree or other. But good coaching can make an enormous difference in a player’s technique and ability to play a better game.

  • I’m looking for people who take full responsibility for putting in the work, and getting it done without needing me to “hold them accountable”. Nagging and reminding aren’t part of my workflow. We make agreements, we set deadlines…and we complete. (Here’s an in-depth exploration of the difference between responsibility and accountability.)

    I also select my writers based on their ability to write. You don’t have to be JK Rowling or Daniel Coyle, but I do require a certain base of craft for you to get the most out of our partnership. If your writing needs more training in the craft of writing than I can reasonably provide given the scope of our engagement, I’ll either build you a custom package or direct you to the appropriate courses to learn the basics. There are also plenty of coaches who work with beginning writers.

    Typically, we can figure this out with a 10-page sample of your writing.

  • Because it takes everything in me. And I’m a good writer.

    After 25 years of writing articles, reviews, strategic plans, annual reports, blog posts, website copy and books, I know how much work goes into every word that hits the page. Ghostwriting demands nailing the message, the tone, and—trickiest of all—the voice.

    For the hired gun, ghosting is a massive undertaking. It demands research, pre-learning, dozens of conversations (recorded and professionally transcribed), lots of thinking and playing and writing and erasing and writing again. Your story takes over my brain for months and months at a time, and I don’t stop looking for how to tell it better. Position it better. Place it better.

    Writing a book is emotionally and energetically consuming. Writing a book for somebody else is self-immolatory.